Chupke Chupke ;) Poem by Rishi Thakkar

Chupke Chupke ;)

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Chupke chupke ek baat Shuru ho gai..
Aankhein 2 se 4 ho gayi..
Fir baar baar Deedar hua..
Unke saamne aane ka har pal intezaar hua..
Wo alag alag khade rehte door door..
Par ankhiyan har pal dekhti rehti ek duje ko dil se ho k majboor..
Chori chori chupke chupke ek baat Shuru ho gai hai..
Dil mein ek duje k unki tasweer chhap gayi hai.
Dheere dheere ek duje ko dekh hoth karwat lete.
Dil hi dil mein kitni saari baat Kehte
Nazron ne haal e dil zahir kar diya maano..
Mil kar karna chahte hai baat ye tum pehechano..
Aur phir ek din yun aaya unke saamne thhi baarish ki shaam jawan aur bheegne k thhe laakho bahane..
Dekha unko saree mein Kisi k intezaar mein
Dil ne kaha pyaare mauka  ye hai tere saamne
Gaye kareeb aur hui Kuch muskurahato waali baat
Fir garji bijli chamak utha aakash
Ghabrayee si wo lipat gai humse dar k maare
Dil ki dhadkan tez hui aur kaha tujhe to isse saccha pyaar hai pyaare..
Uska mann jab sthir hua..
Sharam k mare sir jhuka hua maine us pal mein usse keh diya
Sab Sharam aur sawalo se nata tod diya..
Tumse pyaar hai mujko itna..
Saath phero ko saath janam tak nibhaunga tumhare sath vishvaas tumpe itna..
Usne has k yuh muskuraya
Uski issi ADAA pe mera dil aaya..
Chupke chupke ek baat yu Shuru ho gayi..
Aankh khuli to jaana ki subha hui..
Sapna tha itna sundar soch k phir dil baith gaya..
Tabse dhoonde uss chehere ko jisse mann hi mann nata jod liya       
 

 

Thursday, January 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Upendra Singh Suman 17 January 2016

Chupke chupke ek baat Shuru ho gai.. Aankhein 2 se 4 ho gayi.. Fir baar baar Deedar hua.. Unke saamne aane ka har pal intezaar hua.. वाह! बहुत खूब

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Rishi Thakkar 18 January 2016

Bahut bahut dhanayavaad upendra singh ji

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Kavita Singh 14 January 2016

wah....kash sapne sach hote.....

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Rishi Thakkar 14 January 2016

Sapne agar Sach hote... To kaafi dard aasun naa hote.. Inkaa hona bhi zaroori hai.. Aye dost..thoda dard bhi hai zindigi ka hissa Warna jamta nahi zindagi mein utar chadhao ka kissa

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Abhilasha Bhatt 07 January 2016

An amazingly expressed emotions of love.....well narrated...thanx for sharing :)

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Rishi Thakkar 07 January 2016

Thanks for the appreciation :)

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Rajnish Manga 07 January 2016

Thanks for this amazing poem with a lovely narrative which carried the suspense till the very end. Please keep up the good work. I quote a few lines: Chupke chupke ek baat yu Shuru ho gayi.. Aankh khuli to jaana ki subha hui.. Sapna tha itna sundar soch k phir dil baith gaya..

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Rishi Thakkar 07 January 2016

Thanks sir..the narrative had to be prepared in a way the twist at the end gets a smile on the face :) Your comments mean a lot

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