Cinquain 29 Poem by Charl JF Cilliers

Cinquain 29

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looking
you still don’t see
the well’s coldest depths far
beneath the distortions that are
your face

Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: well
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

We walk around it and yet never see what is in it, Soul is our well and we keep ignoring its warning....Another thought provoking poem.

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Charl Cilliers 13 November 2015

True, Mohammed! Thank you for your kind words. Charl

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Charl JF Cilliers

Charl JF Cilliers

Cape Town, South Africa
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