Circle Poem by ion untaru

Circle

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failure, failure
only remebering you,
I could write a book:
naive, resigned, opportunist
the order of our new order -
beautifull words, beautifull words
poor your victims!
minute after minute
clock after clock,
waiting the last one
all metropol's comfort
for a day and a night
lived in a forrest!
huts, houses, villas,
residences, palaces
the last,
always from four planks...

(translated from romanian)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2009

failure, failure only remebering you, I could write a book: naive, resigned, opportunist lie is full circle comprising of failures, success adn we can write anything which is baneficial to the people... beutiful one.. ilike it....10 read mine all trains stop here.... individual and miss i miss u

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Eyan Desir 03 June 2009

Interesting write IOn

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Sameer Ahmed 17 April 2009

Building metropolism is a futile exercise. Fondness to Matter is human nature but one needs to understand the fruitfulness of the circle you have drawn to show what exactly the human life is about.

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