Clean Poem by Luo Zhihai

Clean

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潔淨

采菊歸來霞滿簍
杖藜而上露全身
湖天一色爭圓月
風雨千山洗垢塵


Clean

I picked chrysanthemums and returned, rosy clouds full in my basket
I walked up on stick, dew on my whole body
Lake and sky in the same color fought for a full moon
The wind and rain in a thousand mountains washed dust and filth

4/16/2020格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9897首對聯體詩
The 9,897th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft) . The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.

Thursday, April 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,lake,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 April 2020

I picked chrysanthemums and returned, rosy clouds full in my basket, wonderful poetic lines.. lake and sky and the full moon. great poem my dear Luo. tony

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Luo Zhihai

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Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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