Close To Heaven Poem by Rob Lamberton

Close To Heaven

Rating: 4.3

O' ironic world of sin
Close to heaven it has been
So close to Heaven

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's really not a senryu!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 21 March 2024

If you look at our planet from space it's beautiful, seemingly an oasis among the stars but come in a little closer, then closer still and you soon learn the bitter truth. In parts it's still heaven though, we just have to learn to respect our environment and each other and to stop warring.

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Bri Edwards 20 March 2024

I, too, may get 'So close to Heaven', but..........never enter in. ;) **** four stars bri

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