Closed Eyes Poem by Marie Bliss

Closed Eyes

Rating: 4.0


I cant think of you
I can only think of the love.
the love
the love
the gulf
the space
i made for you
the breach
the break
my heart at stake
i cant understand
i can only remember the love
the love
the love

Saturday, August 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 July 2018

Wow! Great poetry, Marie. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 May 2016

'I cant think of you I can only think of the love' - describes a particular situation and a state of mind that is well understood by these opening lines.

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Paul Warren 16 August 2015

Nice one in your ode to love

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