Cloudy Weather On A Heartbroken Soul Poem by Brandon Dugan

Cloudy Weather On A Heartbroken Soul

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I'm kicked out of my home
unchained from my happiness
only a dark path leads the way
the clouds darken
the wind blows hard
I stand outside on this path
And it begins to rain...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mimi Mata 13 September 2008

Hello, I can empathize with this one...I am new here on this site please read some of my writing if your precious time allows...It's therapeutic to read and exchange thoughts on a writer's creative thought...Keep it up maybe you'll become famous. With All Gratitude and Respect, Mimi C Mata

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Viola Grey 16 August 2008

sometimes it only takes a few lines to touch your heart...this is one of those times...great work

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