Tirupathi Chandrupatla


Complete Life


In your bright eyes
I see purity flow
I like to clean my heart
Hope to make it glow.

Music I never heard
All through the years
The melody of your voice
Provides rhythm in my ears.

No one touched me to say
I love you with all my heart
Your soothing touch's enough
Only in death shall I part.

My life's now complete
I cherish all your support
I'll live without any worry
With all I'll have a rapport.

Submitted: Thursday, January 02, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, March 05, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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Comments about this poem (Complete Life by Tirupathi Chandrupatla )

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (1/3/2014 6:32:00 AM)

    With passing years, your love deepens! Very romantic! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 605 Points Kavya . (1/3/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    v nicely penned........below lines are wonderful

    Music I never heard
    All through the years
    The melody of your voice
    Provides rhythm in my ears (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,682 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/2/2014 8:14:00 PM)

    what else a poet needs, except the loving touch from the readers! Wonderful.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,558 Points Ramesh Rai (1/2/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Really the life is complete with such dynamic support or else it is futile (Report) Reply

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