Confessions Over A Slice Of Rasberry Truffle Cheesecake Poem by Amanda Lukas

Confessions Over A Slice Of Rasberry Truffle Cheesecake

Rating: 4.1


It was the middle of winter,
the middle of the night.
We were sitting in a diner together,
engaged in small talk.

I was picking at my meal,
more moving the food around with my fork
than actually eating.

I'd ordered a rather plentiful plate
knowing that the chances of me finishing
were slimmer than the chances of me winning the lottery.

In an attempt to avoid eye contact
with my partner in conversation,
I focused on an older man
who sat alone in a corner booth.

His clothes were ragged,
hair all a mess.
I noticed a large knapsack
on the seat next to him.

He'd devoured every morsel
of his hot ham and cheese,
taking tiny bites
and chewing slowly.

As the server passed him by
carrying a slice of cheesecake to our table,
his eyes lit up and
his dark pupils followed it.

I knew then what I should've done.
I knew that man deserved desert
much more than myself.
I took a bite of my cheesecake
and walked out to my car...

Strange how the story goes sometimes:
Now we sit here, in our reserved corner booth,
and the waiter suggests their famous cheesecake
with a complete sentence for name.
I'll order it as you ask the Valet to bring the car.

I suppose some things never change.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seán O' Muiriosa 13 July 2007

I like the description of events here, the moment of decision and how that moment passed leaving a bitter taste, so to speak.. 'And the world didn't change'. Does it ever, dear Amanda, does it ever? Loved this.

0 0 Reply
J M Basey 10 September 2006

Very good poem...very unique....you made me want a cheesecake now...lol. {{Hugs}} Jay

0 0 Reply
Andre Yates 16 February 2006

very nice poem... Artist

0 0 Reply
Mia Ocean 29 January 2006

Very nice. Its touching to know some people would think twice. Great poem.

0 0 Reply
Mary Nagy 10 December 2005

This is very touching Amanda. Maybe next time you'll send a piece over to him. Don't feel bad, most people wouldn't have given it a thought......at least it touched you. Sincerely, Mary

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Amanda Lukas

Amanda Lukas

Ft. Lauderdale, FL
Close
Error Success