Life Poem

Confused - Poem by Life Poem

Hungry for something you can't have

ignoring the tell-tale cries of the wind.

Heart beating at maddening pace

searching for already there answers.

No one can feel what you are

inside of that paralyzed smile.

Each step leads you deeper in

to see the cracks cannot be filled.

Comments about Confused by Life Poem

  • Rookie - 268 Points Young Church Poetry (3/9/2012 2:51:00 AM)

    Brilliant how you describe a confused person, amazing work. (Report) Reply

    3 person liked.
    2 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 0 Points Ashley Davis (7/30/2010 1:56:00 AM)

    Excellent piece of writing!
    Thank you for sharing it =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Life Poem (8/12/2009 12:07:00 PM)

    Dearly appreciated Shan!
    I've found so many great poems here (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/28/2009 6:53:00 AM)

    No one can feel what you are
    inside of that paralyzed smile.

    Nice expressions here my dear friend...... you give a great message..
    always good to get something out of the poem..after reading it..

    with lv
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Life Poem (6/15/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    Thanks Mona.
    I wanted to try something different.
    I'm not sure I nailed it, but your comment is appreciated (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mona Martinez (6/15/2009 8:05:00 PM)

    cool. very nice and creative. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009

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