if I had to cooking for you
first I have to think of you
and make you special to me
but damn....expectations....
you will be my first special dish
in years.....
I would not get through the kitchen
there....oh! Just a excuse....
but i'll be at the dining room
waiting for you....
i would open the door
with snacks and wine and one heart so tight
and a breath so contain displayed on my face
that you'll smile....
and introduced you in my life....
and a beautiful table to delight
two candles, the old china
two glasses of wine
~ could be a Chablis~
the only one I like
as you i think....
I would ask you to choose the music
and maybe we dance
in a trance....
one of the 70 or 80
but...
i dont know if is because you are so close to me
your scent... all is new in you...
i'll poured so much salt,
or
because you are so beautiful on this suit
that the shrimp, will be cremated
i dont know....
better we dance and enjoy
this smoke.... could be our mist
fogged eyes, cold hands, touching for the first time
beating heart, blush on my face....
anyway
love for tonight it is not so bad is not?
salted and burned
not...not so bad
heart so tight .........this is really 'nice'. that the shrimp, will be cremated ..........if this means what i think it means [and i plan to spend more time on this poem another day, giving 'helpful suggestions' as i am wont to do for some, sometimes], i REALLY like it. [ i NEVER use the word wont! ] Poetheart M., i am not familiar with 'having coke with you' and i probably won't bother checking on it. but i am grateful to F.O. for the inspiration given to you. as always, the english is a bit rough in spots..............so what? but i may give you some advice later, as i already said. ALSO, as always (i think) i have enjoyed your style here VERY much. it is kind of like watching a movie unfold, nicely. [there i go with nice again; well, i could say worse things! ] i wonder how many readers (mostly men probably) wish they were the one coming to your door for dinner, dancing, and? oh yeah, DVDs. thanks for sharing. bri :)
Best cook who knows the favourite dishes to make me cheer and dance with you. The dish of your poetry is delicious and hygenic. it gives me a long life. Regards ever for the best cook of poetry. I have not made any bargaining paid in full.10 out of 10. Am i miser.Namaste! ! !
Best cook who knows the favourite dishes to make me cheer and dance with you. The dish of your poetry is delicious and hygenic. it gives me a long life. Regards ever for the best cook of poetry. Namaste! ! !
Romantic evenings, South American style. I an feel the lilt of the samba right through this poem. Hasta luego senora.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice. A delightful scene any man would love to be part of.