Crying Poem by Kacey Hauck

Crying



weakness' hiding themselve to the world
they were held prisoners against their will
they had no choice but to stay kept inside
for the captors fear of letting them kno, of letting them show

together as one the weakness are no longer weak
bearing together to break free
they need out they need let loose
now they have their own say

a sudden strike quick and strong
the captor knows somthing is wrong
there they go flowing as a river would
now they feel free, feeling good

now ashamed that she wasnt strong enough
she had it all right
she was strong, stable, & tough
but now they see her tears

these were her captives
what she was fearing all along
they see her weakness
she didnt want to share

now she is crying
it is something she cant bear.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

weakness' hiding themselve to the world they were held prisoners against their will it is weakness that makes us cry.... but we should control it otherewise it will briang shame on us... very good write i must say...10 read mine.... cry not....miss i miss u.... butterflies around and o, mother

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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

top 2 bottom another GREAT piece of work. you are very talented 4 sure

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I love the lightness and the imagery. Great Job

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