Crying Until I Die Poem by Courtney Phillips

Crying Until I Die

Rating: 5.0


I cry today, tomorrow,
and the next
Nothing special or
advanced
Just a tear and a cut
Nothing that i'll regret
in the morning
Just a simple little plea
Just some help i'll never
seek
Always trying to find a way
to make me die today....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Edan Oliver Palma 21 August 2009

Just a tear and a cut... Nothing that I'll regret in the morning... Had my worries, tons of 'buts'... Yet I never saw this coming.... hope you don't mind.... just wanted to connect with the feeling... This is one of your bests.... ;) Write on.....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 September 2008

touchy composition... cry not.... go forward....things of joy ahead we all experience day and night thus life going on...............10

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Very sad..why the tears?

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Chris Newlash 07 September 2008

good one

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Viola Grey 07 September 2008

'Just a simple little plea Just some help i'll never seek'...... I like the way these two lines contradict each other....nice work

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