Daissociating Our Love Poem by Prasetya Utama

Daissociating Our Love

Rating: 5.0


Do you still remember
when we in the morning go up
in the same train
you fallen down
beside me
with the hurt feet bleed
until come to your house
I dress a wound the feet
I dress a wound your heart
but at last we apart distance
so far
dissociating our love
like your hand gesture
following train which quickly
going easterly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

It is not known whether u met her again? ! But this is a great experience in train or bus; getting acquainted with a new person of opposite sex; get enamoured and the end of journey ends the friendship. Many peoples' experience. A right subject for poetry; so well written.............my heartfelt 10

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Anjali Sinha 25 September 2008

nice poetry gesture of hand then disappearance of love regards anjali

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