Dark Dark Girl Poem by kyle potter

Dark Dark Girl

Rating: 4.7


Dark girl so filled with strife
Dark Dark girl she'll take your life
Dark girl stay for a while
Dark Dark girl she makes me smile
Dark girl she shows no fear
Dark Dark girl is always near
Dark girl wont see her cry
Dark Dark girl just wants to die

But Dark girl lives in the dark
so you dont see her painfull mark

Dark Dark girl may never know
just how much the light can show

Dark Dark Girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aya Kishiko 01 September 2011

It should be LIGHT girl.. negative poems are all over in here - it's good to express your feelings, but isn't it tiring? ..^_^..pfufufu.try to smile and enjoy life once in a while. fighting!

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Cleide Tatyana Almeida 03 June 2010

One word; well actually I need to write over twenty characters apparently. Now that I've done that, here's the word: AWESOME!

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Kyle Potter 26 April 2010

thank you, i had a lot of fun writing it about my friend that hated the poem :)

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Mackenzy Edmonds 26 April 2010

its so amazing i luv it

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i like it nice work ++10++

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Umar Kabir 03 April 2015

I absolutely love the last line

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Umar Kabir 03 April 2015

i absolutely love the final line

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melanie stinnett 12 January 2015

I love this

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Crystal Martin 28 August 2013

i can definetly relate im like the dark girl but there is no light for me good poem

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Dragon Crenshaw 28 November 2012

I CAN SO RELATE TO THIS REALLY GOOD POEM REALLY GOOD

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