Dawn Approaches Poem by Tango

Dawn Approaches

Rating: 4.3


Venus hangs brightly in the sky,
to the moon, she says goodbye.
For the sky is becoming lighter in the east,
as the birds begin to chatter,
before starting, their early morning feast.
It is the start of a brand new day,
as nature continues on her way.

Tango.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 22 May 2009

an inspiration of the new day..this is nice..i like the presentation..naizz

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Kesav Easwaran 22 May 2009

Sweet imageries on approaching dawn...refreshing write Tango...as the early morning breeze...10

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 20 May 2009

My favourite time, running out barefooted to feed the birds over dew covered grass - nature continues to enthral and inspires us to write of these wonderful moments as you have done, thank you Tango - charming read 'Venus saying goodbye to Moon' at start of a new day - Cindy

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