Dear Wind Poem by Jose Baez

Dear Wind



So quiet like the wind
She said good bye
Surrounded by the silence
And don’t know why.


And quietly I walked
Going no where
Searching for her breath
In every rose.



Quietly dear wind
Why don’t you go
And tell to my darling
I'm still along
Suffering and wishing
Her smiling of love.



Dear wind,
You can visit her at your own will
And take along with you
Just a picture of how I look.


Dear wind
And bring me back her breath that is so sweet
Cause never never is too late to love
When love come from soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cleveland Gibson 23 January 2014

An interesting poem full of sentiment. It need slight changes to a word here, and a word thee. Nothing too dramatic so that should make revision easier. Best

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