Death's Bed Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Death's Bed

Rating: 5.0


I will try
On death's cry
To not say
In dismay
I screwed up
Maybe I
And just you
Shared tears
In such lost
Avenues

Monday, April 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,death of a friend,regret,sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 09 April 2018

A desperate bid to redeem oneself at the end of the life's journey.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2018

Precisely what Kerouac was striving for, Rajnish. Thank You!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Painful. Touching expression. Thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2018

Exactly what I was striving for, Kumarmani. Thank You!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 April 2018

Richard, a fantastic Kerouac series....10+++*

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2018

Thank you so much, Bernard. This series will eventually become a book. And I want it to pay due homage to the spiritual nature of Kerouac.

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