~deepest Blue~ Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

~deepest Blue~

Rating: 5.0


Love comes silent.
Your shadow's close,
yet not near enough.
Falling deep your sighs,
as my echos rise.

Long is this yearning,
eternally burning.
Feel my fire for You...
As my flame turns
deepest blue.

2-28-06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 01 March 2006

Dear Kim, the feeling in this one came across really well.Thankyou for sharing your art.Love Duncan

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Linda Preston 01 March 2006

Compact poem that says what it has to say well :)

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