Defeat Poem by manaswini dash

Defeat

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On that day-
My storehouse was filled with lots of wealth.
Everything was there-
Name, fame, beauty, money and jewels
which made my life superb and worth-living.
I was the master of all the affluence.
I used to walk in vanity.
Though my path was long,
but it was illuminated with thousands of lamps.
I was singing the songs of success in an acute accent.
With a proud tone I used to pronounce-
the hymn of subjugating the whole world
I was under incantation for continuous winning
I had a weapon of self confidence in my hand.
I used to sip from my cup of nectar while enjoying the world.
In spite of my strong and sharp weapon,
I could not check my robbery.
Time-that cruel robber
came slowly but firmly to my life
and robbed me of my belongings.
It robbed my beauty, my youth
my vanity and my confidence.
It took the nectar from my cup
and filled it with the sigh and tears of old age
My beautiful face became ugly with wrinkles.
My vanity was won over by helplessness.
The string of my friendship became weaker.
My weapon of self confidence became rusted.
After this devastating robbery and oppression-
I became a defeated, coward, and totally dumbfounded person
Still standing alone on the shore of life with some hidden hopes
The hope may be of rising of my self esteem once again
The hope may be of coming of a friend someday
to hear the pathetic song of my dejected and distressed life.
Everything uncertain, but still I am waiting

Monday, July 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 09 July 2018

excellent descriptive poem O certainty of everything Look- I am the king of world but beggarly I try to grip my fame no name; no name after all on the expiration time of my body i am rotten fleshy gall.......... really excellent thought

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Manaswini Dash 11 July 2018

Dear Mahtab Bangalee, Your appreciation of my poem in a poetic form is really excellent. Particularly I like the lines I am the king of world, but beggarly I try to grip my fame. Thanks a lot.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 July 2018

It took the nectar from my cup and filled it with the sigh and tears of old age My beautiful face became ugly with wrinkles. My vanity was won over by helplessness.... defeated, and a coward i became..pathetic song of dejected life. hold on to God. for God we are always lovely beings. do not think too much of the past. live every day well. Everymorning praise God for everything........ thank u for this poem.. thank u very much. it made me think a lot. tony

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Manaswini Dash 11 July 2018

Dear Dr. Tony, lots of thanks to you for your appreciation of my poems. I have faith on God and I know I am also dear to Him. But the poem was about the reality of life.Thanks again.

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