Desires Poem by abhipsa panda

Desires

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Unlimited desires in human life,
pass through hurdles to reach the sight.
Some are achieved and some are dreams type,
unachieved frustrates nd achieved makes us delight.

The heap of desires provide the destiny,
which becomes our sole purpose.
Though the stages comes in are many,
which seems the gateway to purpose

Wednesday, April 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: desire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2018

The heap of desires provide the destiny, which becomes our sole purpose. at the gateway to the purpose, a very fine poem with high ideals of achieving great things in life. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

Thank you sir.......for reading my poem and giving a positive feedback

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 October 2018

Unlimited desires in human life, pass through hurdles to reach the sight. a great thought and a philosophy....... it is desires which make us work hard and try to fulfill our visions. as u say, some are achieved, some are not but we go forward. As u stated in another poem., time waites for no one...... but we wish, we aspire, we desire.......... and we procede till the end of our lives......... God give u the strength to write more in these themes...... it is invigourating.. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 06 October 2018

Thanks a lot sir for you valuable words of appreciation

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