Didactically Firing Blanks Poem by Thomas Vaughan Jones

Didactically Firing Blanks

Rating: 4.7


If poetry is not disposed to rhyme
Would it still honour metrical display;
Could lyrics sing and still maintain the tune
and ballads hold their pleasing harmony?
Could we at least place scansion to the fore,
Some form of cadence to enhance the words?

Or shall we face the bleak alternative,
When streams of self-expression have their say?
Mute mutterings cathartically on show,
demanding answers only from the id.
While streams of dumb verbosity hold sway;
Cacaphonies sung by discordant brass.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Some folk like to rhyme. For some reason, others seem vehemently opposed to it. This is a plea for compromise.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Vaughan Jones 26 March 2014

Cheers for that guys. Declan you surely kissed the Blarney stone, if only while you slept. Drop into my Academy and see if something there can direct that sublime Irish verbosity. You might be a latent Yeats :)

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Anthony Burkett 12 March 2014

Delightfully penned! Truly a heartfelt plea... ;) Thomas, your outstanding vocabulary... and your splendid use of... it is always of supreme enjoyment to me! Touché, Sir! :)

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Valerie Dohren 04 March 2014

Prose is prose and poetry is poetry - to my mind, true poetry rhymes. Modern prose is not true poetry IMHO. Well expressed Thomas,

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 04 March 2014

There must be nothing in the poem that should be attractive...this poem talks about that...thank you for sharing your thought, Thomas..

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