Discovering You Poem by Tia Maria

Discovering You

Rating: 5.0


It was like finding a treasure
You are a precious gem
You gave me such pleasure
Again and again
Now we cannot keep in touch
We have faded in the haze
But I will never forget how much
I discovered those few days

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

This is wonderful Tia, such gentleness shown, yet strong emotion....I really do like your style of writing..... Thanks for this Tia..............Keep expressing my friend Best wishes Jon.

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Natasha Dementia 28 June 2008

What a lovely peice, happy and sad at the same time, I: heart: it much, XD

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blue 802 03 July 2008

I wonder why your not in touch..... love this work regards Tom

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Carl Harris 26 March 2009

This is a beautifully written poem, Tia, one that tells lovingly of a romantic encounter that was unique in intensity and wonderment and from which a deep personal fulfillment was gained. Like all such marvellous experiences, it was all too brief and the parties have drifted away into their very different lives. Yet tne memory of that enjoyable romance lingers, like a vivid impressionist painting, to be savored again and again in a corner of your memory as the years gently unfold. This is indeed, a very beautiful and deeply touching poem. Carl.

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David Threadgold 15 September 2008

Hi Tia. A few days of pleasure, with someone you treasure, is way-y-y-y beyond measure. A pleasure to read. Regards Dave T. **10**

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

A nice poem of discovering someone. Enchanting.

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Junior Pocoloco 28 August 2008

Very well put, finding, enjoing, losing, then remembering. Pablo Neruda said in his poem 'Saddest Poem' that love is so short and forgetting is so long.

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Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008

Heart felt emotions. Beautiful yet a bit sad all in one.

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