Dold Poem by Hakima Smaali

Dold

Rating: 4.5


i feel so dold
in judgment i wasn't old
because i forgot
not every glitter is gold

now i regret
regret the words untold
what within me has been hold

now i rue
my heart he stoled
my heart he controlled
and my life he paterolled
but me he never consolled

than with cheap, me he sold
threw me away
like a rag paper, me, he enrolled
but i shall care no more
bcuz my heart is now ice cold

Wednesday, June 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hadil Diaf 20 June 2016

That is a beautiful heartbreaking poem dear Hakima, well chosen words and sweet rythme. ♥

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