Don't Crumble Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Don't Crumble

Rating: 5.0


Loneliness is not to crumble and fumble
no need to cry or scream in shamble
make the sad moments to scramble
let the damages and destructions... tumble
but learn how to be kind and humble
in the existing days; as we need to re assemble
though we have plenty of choices to reshuffle
be firm to lead a life, as a colourful ensemble.

Wednesday, August 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 24 August 2016

Inspiring poem, Nicely written ...10++++ though we have plenty of choices to reshuffle be firm to lead a life, as a colourful ensemble.

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I am blessed to receive more positive comments thank a lot dear poet

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 August 2016

Hi Saraswathy, A very poignant poem on the way the poet looks at her life- how to make it worth living: ....we need to reassemble.... life as a colourful ensemble..... Beautifully penned. Thank you.10+++

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Happy to read your encouraging note, thanks poet

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

To be kind and humble! ! Nice piece of work.

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I believe, these two magical nature do wonders, thanks dear poet

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