Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 175 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

Don'T Put Ice On My Heart - Poem by Vishal Sharma

i am the beginning part of our love story
that slightly become more deeper by poetry
and the way i writes about your feathers
i bet task could not be accomplished by others

you remain in my memories till i have my soul
and remember you get my love not in fractions
but in whole.
you are the ultimate destiny of my survival
i accept you whole before this holy bible.

you have the charm of make me dull
but this has proved to me a far fruitfull
i start loving you my dear once again
do not put ice on my heart in this rain.


Comments about Don'T Put Ice On My Heart by Vishal Sharma

  • Rookie - 12 Points Shreya Nair (6/14/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    and you called me with golden pen! when you yourself have its possession! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie ~ Jenie~ (6/13/2013 1:36:00 AM)

    it hurts vishal
    do you agree dear poet (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,280 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/13/2013 12:54:00 AM)

    great love, thanks.
    Please read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 13, 2013


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