Downhill Poem by Faith Wood

Downhill



I'll let you lean on me like that brick wall
I'll let you put your back agaisnt me like that tall oak in the park
I'll be that friend you hold
until you can't feel a thing
If that's what it takes to meet your standards

I'll surpass the clouds, be your sky
I'll fall through the stars, be your space
I'll scale the mountains, be your closure
I'll hang from cliffs, be your trampoline

What does it take to be
that log that dances in the flames?
That loaf of bread that crumbles?
I have courage to face the distances
and the never-ending waits in long lines

But if the brikes break, there will be no wall
If that tree bends, there will be no place to lay your back
If your friends are lost in highwater
there will be no one to hold you
so down the hill
we go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Dead Poet 18 February 2007

its a great poem Aldo! I especially like the lines: What does it take to be that log that dances in the flames? That loaf of bread that crumbles? I felt that part the most

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Aldo Kraas 18 February 2007

This is not a bad poem

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