Draught Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Draught

Rating: 5.0

You
started
to stalk me
with your love
like a drizzle.

rains
have no
choice
but to
shower
themselves
out.

Now
I am
caught
in a draught

parched

Monday, May 20, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: love,rain,drizzle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 12 June 2024

How well you combined the love, nature and life together, Full ******

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Thank you, Asimji. You have phrased your comments so beautifully and hearteningly that I have tears in my eyes

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Anjandev Roy 11 June 2024

Brilliant and meaningful piece.......

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Thank you Anjandevji. ‘Love that has gone' (to borrow the words of Sara Teasdale) leaves you parched..

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You leave me parched….. of love

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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