Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A)

Rookie - 159 Points (Iran, Islamic republic of)

Drops of Hardship


Simon heard this from his girl friend,
' I am driven up a wall,

Simon Asked: what do you mean?
' i mean we are not friends at all

John was signing up for a job,
he was hopeful for the case,

Oh, Mr. John Wild, we are sorry deeply,
he was rejected, tears were on his face

questo non è buono
or these are the common accidents?

do we understand in a bad way?
or we all make these events?

as both sea and see are pronounce the same,
but it's on us to decide how to see,

when we face difficult conditions,
it's on us to be as calm as a sea

but both has different meanings, sea and see
one is mostly blue and the other is colorful

Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2014
Edited: Saturday, April 12, 2014

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Comments about this poem (Drops of Hardship by Ellias Anderson C.A ( Known as captain A) )

  • Bronze Star - 5,586 Points Bri Edwards (5/20/2014 9:55:00 PM)

    i especially enjoyed the first 8 lines. the rest was less so (not enjoyed so much) . i would put a d at the end of pronounce. i'll send more input in a message.

    it is bad enough when two words which are spelled differently but sound the same have different definitions. it is even worse, in my opinion, when two words are pronounced the same, have different meanings, but are spelled the same. like general (the noun) and general (the adjective) . thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (4/23/2014 11:08:00 AM)

    Ellias, you always have nice pen to write something for you.. this always known well as signature of your style..nice Ellie_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (4/20/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    Really, I've never ever thought of words sea and see in this way..........Captain, you deep observational skills are remarkable! ........lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Alookh (matin) (4/15/2014 3:01:00 AM)

    oh! interesting! this one a bit different with ur other works i think....and the last line was nice...i haven't thought in this way abt see and sea before! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Marco Angelo (4/12/2014 10:53:00 AM)

    dipende da come si sta andando a faccia con la vita...... vuoi essere un grande uomo, dovete provare duro.
    godetevi la vostra poesia. (Report) Reply

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