Drowning Poem by Bryan Alexander

Drowning

Rating: 4.5


trapped beneath the surface
the icy cold fills my lungs
I watch the suns rays
bounce off the waves surface
reflecting on the seconds left
I have to live
water in my lungs grows heavy
and I am weak
pull me toward the seas floor
to the treasures that you keep
the tiny bubbles that dance around my head
are a million galaxys

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margo Posh 26 November 2009

This is of course, the ultimate senario, the finest hour, the moment of reckoning... not for one, but for us all..... lovely x

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Sonya Florentino 24 September 2009

love this drowning poem....never thought dying could sound so beautiful! !

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