Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 421 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'Dry Water' - Poem by Shania K. Younce

As tu walk seeing only air.
In far mountains rung moist air.
As if tu could hear the water trickle.
The humid parche tongue of moistless error.
The water did evaporate.
So, dry the air tu knew the water will not come.

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

The word tu is the singular you in french. I'm really thirsty. Which is why I made up this poem. Please comment at will and with honesty.

Comments about 'Dry Water' by Shania K. Younce

  • Rookie - 229 Points Prasanna Kumari (1/21/2014 11:59:00 PM)

    that brings a feeling of water and waterlessness....good poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 22, 2014

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