Dusk Is A Shift In Time Poem by Terence George Craddock

Dusk Is A Shift In Time



dusk seems a quiet time
a strange quiet time
a light fading time

a light fading transitional time

a good time
to sit at the beach
to watch the waves

catch catch elusive fading waves

the waves
as the day slowly fades
fades into dusk

a long spent day fading into dusk

into fading fading light
into gathering gathering dark
and the birth birth of stars

fading light gathering dark star births

stars in fade blue
to dark dark night sky
star light sparkles

Saturday, November 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,light,night,stars,time,timeless,waves
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in November 2020 on the 7.11.2020.
Inspired by the poem 'Abenddämmerung/Dusk' by the poet Heinrich Heine.
Dedicated to the poet Henrich Heine.
A split image from the poem 'Dusk Fades Into Gathering Night' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 07 November 2020

dusk seems a quiet time a strange quiet time a light fading time.....this is really beautiful. Meaningful. a long spent day fading into dusk into fading fading light into gathering gathering dark and the birth birth of stars fading light gathering dark star births stars in fade blue to dark dark night sky star light sparkles.....this is beautiful expression of dusk which we feel demoralising. Thank-you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 November 2020

a long spent day fading into dusk into fading fading light into gathering gathering dark and the birth birth of stars /// beautifully expressed

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