Dying Poem by Billy Loving

Dying



Ripping burning flesh
Oozing red blood, so fresh
Blade falls to the ground
Crimson pool starts to surround

Body beginning to grow weak
Wound's unyielding leak
Collapsing to the ground
In my blood, I might drown

Light beginning to dim
My chances, so slim
Loss of consciousness, complete
Silent peaceful sleep, so sweet

Tuesday, November 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sofia Kioroglou 03 November 2015

An excellent poem and it really strikes a chord taking into consideration the recent plane crash in the Sinai peninsula. God rest their souls!

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