Echo Poem by shel cope

Echo

Rating: 5.0


Love’s gravity works in reverse
so my heart is free now.
Time dilated
to a lovers pace.

Dancing breathless
through dark immensities
beyond reflections and conceits
flaring like a wayward star
wrapping the world
in love’s whispers.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 12 March 2008

Brilliant crafting Shel, the first two lines have caught me, got me in a quandary! Does your heart feel free when the pull is gone? Or did I read you wrong? Whichever, it's very good. HG: -) xx

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Simone Inez Harriman 25 March 2008

How elated the soul when ready to love again. Thank you Shel.

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Alison Cassidy 24 March 2008

This is beautiful Shel. An exceptionally well written and original expression of a timeless subject. I am impressed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Priyanka Shetty 22 March 2008

thanks for sharing.... it's an awesome poem..

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Lynda Robson 20 March 2008

I can but echo what other people have said, a very profound piece, I enjoyed reading it,10 Lynda x

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Tsira Goge 13 March 2008

shel, You write perfectly well, Likely good feeling...Tsira

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