[echoed Aberration] Poem by Frozen Beauty
[echoed Aberration]
force yourself
in conversation
though questioning
the situation
make your mark
pretend it's your own
with ignorance
just under the bone
presume yourself
in control
manipulate
the complications
excuse yourself
of expectations
coerced moments
arcane from the start
overtly reborn
then torn apart
withdrawn by this
forsaken heart.
(12/12/08)
I really like this piece, excellent title, its what drew me in. Great flow and good word usage!
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