Jasmine Appelhaus

Rookie - 0 Points (2-28-97)


is it so
that there is only four elements of life
or could it be
that there is many more
than meets the eye

one time
two life
three death
four pain...

no wait...
could it be
that theres more

five love
six peace
seven lust
eight deception

many elements surround us
day by day
and night by night

nine soul
ten fullfilment
eleven home
twelve desire

and so are these
the elements in which we must control
for every element
we do so desire

and every element is hidden
or trapped for us to break free
to save and to share...

Submitted: Wednesday, July 14, 2010

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Elements by Jasmine Appelhaus )

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (7/14/2010 12:33:00 PM)

    I liked this because I used my mind to get the meaning....good work
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

Read all 1 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  3. If, Rudyard Kipling
  4. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  5. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  6. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  7. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  8. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  9. Death is Nothing at All, Henry Scott Holland
  10. Dreams, Langston Hughes
[Hata Bildir]