Empty Mind Poem by Prabir Gayen

Empty Mind

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Empty Mind

In this spare time of life,
Life has become a resting site,
A hollow space for rumination,
Past has gone into the catacomb of past.

The slow movement of mind,
With the slow pace of time,
Mind and time become nothing,
Only a vague delight is falling.

The Life - a great feast of mind,
With thoughts colourful is mild,
It moves with slow plaintive plod,
With pain becoming pensive abode.

All the dreams that swayed with hope,
Nurturing childhood dreams to be a someone,
A special one to have strong root and wings,
Now with blows of Time on the ground falls.

A world of nothing without thoughts of becoming,
In my cloistered self like stream dawning,
Every moment I am born and without dream dying,
Life has become a shoreless pasturage moving.

Future is nebulous and mystic too,
Within the womb of time it does fuse,
Time has become timeless having no vigor,
Life has become a worshiper without Vesper.

All the delights to be in the seed of time,
The hope to have an upward flight,
Drinking every drop that oozes from the vim of Being,
In thoughtless leisure demise; recede to abysmal ruin.

Plodding on the pathless path,
Without thought like a vast space of light,
I am a sky Now with no heavenly bodies,
Within and without I Am a vast Nothing.
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@ prabir Gayen : 11/02/2019: 12: 34 PM

Empty Mind
Monday, February 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 11 February 2019

Empty mind...but explosion thoughts are surrounded your words here. Poem was written with soft tone, strong idea and wonderful observation!

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Very grateful for your beautiful comment..dear poet...Unwritten Soul...thanks

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 February 2019

A well penned poem, Prabir......10+++

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Jankovic Zoran 24 February 2019

Everyone has an empty mind, but those who know that they think they always fill their own so that it is never empty. When he does not work he has a need to rest and we can not always sleep. You type big word do not worry my friend.

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Rajnish Manga 12 February 2019

An 'Empty Mind' and the people who possess it have been essayed in an objective manner quite elaborately. I must thank you for change in the age-old narrative whereby it (Empty Mind) used to be a devil's workshop. Thanks for this highly analytical piece of poetry as well as for sharing the image of Sri Sri Ravi Shankar ji. In thoughtless leisure demise; recede to abysmal ruin. Within and without I Am a vast Nothing.

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Prabir Gayen 12 February 2019

Beautiful comment....thanks poet...The great

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 February 2019

thoughtful stanza- Future is nebulous and mystic too, Within the womb of time it does fuse, Time has become timeless having no vigor, Life has become a worshiper without Vesper.//// beautiful poem penned

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 February 2019

Space of light! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 11 February 2019

Plodding on the pathless path, Without thought like a vast space of light, I am a sky Now with no heavenly bodies, Within and without I Am a vast Nothing. - - - - A deeply philosophical write, thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 12 February 2019

Thanks dear poetess.....

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