Treasure Island

wandering star

(31-10-76 / cork, ireland)

Empty Promises


You promised her the moon
She held a moonbeam for a minute
You promised her sunshine
It only filtered through the clouds
You promised her roses
She felt only thorns
You promised her the world
She walks an island
You promised her warmth
She feels a distant glow
You promised her forever
You promised forever
You promised

Submitted: Thursday, November 20, 2008
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  • Krista Churchill (11/21/2008 12:34:00 AM)

    I feel some hurt at the end of this poem.. Which fits the poem well. this is a great write...


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