On the fragrant petals the waiting eyes
The snowballs making whitest the dawn
Doves chirping waking up with the sunrise
On the morning door, you knocking the heart
Through crystal glass the cat's eyes observing
Hot coffee of the cup evaporating the tears
The feelings kissing your salacious tone to tone
On the yolk of the sun every day our love is born
© Mahtab Bangalee
13 February,2022
Chattogram
The theme, metaphors, and thoghts of the poem enchant me a lot. I appreciate you
The theme, language and metaphors are lucid and enchanting which captivate and fascinate our minds. The metaphor 'cat's eye observing' is excellent.
The theme, metaphors, and thoghts of the poem enchant me a lot. I appreciate you.
beautiful imagery you are created here. everyday is the day of love for lover and beloved
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
On the morning door, you knocking the heart, beautiful expression