Excuse Me Please Poem by Sean Green
Excuse Me Please
Excuse me please while I indulge
naughtiness born of lust
a restlessness I'll cater to
revel in full latitude
to which ends I can't admit
suffice to say it was obscene
in the eyes of proper folk
not admitting to the same
this tag is made on judgment's tongue
admitting more by the unsaid
when jealousy may be implied
as virtue struggles to stay alive
freedom lives beyond these taunts
devilry on personal terms
though the actions may seem prude
compared to those who push all curves
a derivation of what's fun
sourced in consent between two souls
or maybe more if the crowd
convenes to play in carefulness
in private spaces away from most
not advertising except to say
fellow travelers may apply
leave convention at the door.
© 2018. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved.20181208.
A mighty fine outlook, and a good poem, articulated to a fault yet beaming with condescending and cynical ire. needless to say 10/10
Wow. Thank you! Human nature still surprises me, mostly with delight.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 5:19:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
stanza 4: i think " prudish" i wonder what " judgment's tongue" means derivation? " the obtaining or developing of something from a source or origin" " the crowd convenes to play in carefulness" orgy time? ? convention: " a way in which something is usually done, especially within a particular area or activity" Yes, maybe not Bible Belt stuff. But? bri :)