Unintelligible Susurration


Excuses Poem by Unintelligible Susurration


Making up excuses
to not accompany
me

I am not
your friend anymore
I get it
no need for any words

a painting is enough
just make it visible
and I will leave you alone

The verisimilitude
I will need to carefully
look for
if I were
to miss it
the opportunity
will slip away

Submitted: Tuesday, May 14, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 12, 2013
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I wrote this poem when I felt people would purposely avoid or ignore me (no surprise there) . I was positive they didn't want me to be their friend but if that was the case, I wanted them to just tell me directly.

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