Expander 02: Autumn Pleasures Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Expander 02: Autumn Pleasures

Rating: 5.0


Fall,
hiking
in the hills.
Watching wildlife,
enjoying nature.
It doesn't get better
than seeing a big bull moose
rubbing his antlers on a tree.
Give me the forest; you keep the town!
Autumn makes me feel very much alive.

Expander 02: Autumn Pleasures
Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: mountains,wildlife
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Each line contains one more syllable than the previous line. Written 16 June 2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 07 November 2018

Nice picture! You can hike down the poem, but watch out - the wildlife step is a killer!

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Kim Barney 21 February 2022

Ha! Very funny! Thanks, Spock!

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Darwin Henry Beuning 07 November 2018

Kim, very nice. I rate a 10

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

The pic is wonderful

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Kim Barney 13 April 2022

Thank you, Unnikrishnan. How about if I call you Unnik for short? Or maybe just Unk?

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

I am just wondering, what will happen to my iPad, if you chose to write a poem of thousand lines!

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

This poem is captivating. And expander format too. I am just wondering, if

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Cowboy Ron Williams 21 February 2022

Wow! I think this is the best of your Expander poems so far! Great picture, too!

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Kim Barney 05 March 2022

Thanks, Ron.

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Kim Barney 10 November 2018

All my efforts are in vain! Poem Hunter has added the soundtrack anyway. Why do they torment me like this?

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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