Expression Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Expression

Rating: 4.7


In the rhyme of iambic rains
I'm wetting; sweet scent of
Cake in my writings nostrils

Nostrils of the poetic sense in
Off mood; barren field the whole
Day is seeking the crops of words

Words is the lost substance of
The subconscious pen; meditating
Regions of heart weaving a path

Path now showing me the light in
This rising night; I'm writing a
Goalless hive of my expression

Expression of time in me like a bee
To survive for a name hoarding honey


22.08.2020 Chattogram

Saturday, August 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: expressions,writings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 22 August 2020

Honey to make nectar of love. Which your poetic expression did In a style of your own. Nicely expressed. Clear 10...

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Varsha M 22 August 2020

A very good chain poetry expressing explicitly to survive a name hoarding honey. Well written work.

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Poetic Sky 22 August 2020

WHY YOU RIGHT SUCH POEM WHICH HAS NO MEANING......... WHY WHY WHY> > > > WHY MB of BD.. YOU are Poet Lost Now.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singb 22 August 2020

An excellent poetic expression.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 August 2020

Wonderful poetic expressions on writings. Words are sometimes so elusive that the pen has to seek for its own path. Beautifully crafted.

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

poetic words are the best way to express thyself!

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 August 2020

Words is the lost substance of The subconscious pen; meditating Regions of heart weaving a path Very fine poetic expressions my dear Mahtab. tony

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Rajnish Manga 25 August 2020

I have no words to express my appreciation for this poem. It has been crafted elegantly which adds to its poetic format coupled with the beauty of its content and musing. Thanks dear friend.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2020

A well composed piece. Simply impressive and delightful....10+++

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Poetic Sky 23 August 2020

You wet me wet we both are WETTING IN SAME MAN AND WOMAN THET WET LIKE THIS HONEY IS TO ENJOY DON'T HOARD IT SHARE WITH OTHERS

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