F-Moll Poem by Liza Sud

F-Moll



I used to smile at all your words.
They are like mood's exhaling.
Flexible canvas is of gold
In the bowl of our patience.

It's like the sky - you cannot grasp the bottom.
There are cold stars of the oblivion of autumn.
What separates us - to 'He' and to 'She'?
We are like particles, an anti-gravity...

Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: music
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 13 November 2015

as far as those energies, sometimes I think of it like creator and anti-creator you really can't have one without the other thanks for these wonderful ideas you share freely, bless you

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Sanjukta Nag 17 October 2015

wow. each line is equally beautiful. loved the last stanza. extraordinary.

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Shakil Ahmed 17 October 2015

beautiful poem, well-composed. thanks for sharing. if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments

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