I recalled those days
When time was right
When going was smooth
When dreams were big
When I was doing good
I recalled those words
Which my mind said
Which my tongue uttered
Which my lips supported
Which i said in hunger
I recalled my life
When eyes looked straight
When hands shanked firm
When legs walked strong
In this same place
I entered the same place
Now with a calm legs
Now with a folded hands
Now with a fallen eyes
Along with a low beat
I had searched for words
I was ashamed to talk
I stood with tight lips
I had fallen down finally
I accepted my failure openly
It gave me lot of relief
It gave me peace of mind
It showed me helping hands
It moved lot of my worries
It made my eyes straight again
My choice was really hard
It took lot of time
It took lot of courage
It took lot of killing
My falling was not a failure
I had fallen only to rise
Well expressed. It's beautiful and very true. keep it up.
amazing lines.......falling was to rise......beautiful lines to ponder on........see my 10+++
Wow another great poem. it is so true some time's we need to fall befor we can rise to somthing greater. awesome job.
everyone has to fall before they can rise again... I believen you're writing nice work Krista
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I would like to translate this poem
My falling was not a failure I had fallen only to rise ------- Amazing and unique ending............Great craft...10+++