Falling Poem by Lely Atempa

Falling



Everyday I'm falling

Down, down into empty space

Falling until I break

Like a bird knocked out of the sky

Falling from the sky
Until I start to fly once again

Falling until i drop completely
Until I'm out of life

Until I breath out my last word

"Falling"

Falling to my ending
Falling through time

Like a lifeless bird in this world

I'm falling through life.

Falling
Tuesday, July 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: failure,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 July 2018

A superb imaginative poem expressing the morose feel creatively and the greatness of the poem and the quote ought to cheer u up and make u write more such super ones. Kudos. Pleez do add your thoughts/comment on my newest poem too titled, mirage surprise

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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

We have the feeling of falling in your poem.++10

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