Falling Apart Poem by PSyChoPaTh emo.91

Falling Apart

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A glance at the horizon,
so near it seems,
I stand on edge.
Why, did I have to be here?
How, did I come so far from near?
The years flew past,
and once a time when
family ties held fast;
It exists now, shattered.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 01 November 2008

very nice. i feel like this sometimes................................

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Ana Monnar 17 September 2007

Very nice poem expressing your emotions. The message was clear and came along. Your choice of words for your phrases are very well chosen. : -))

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