False Certainty Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

False Certainty

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“I’m rich! I’m rich” I shouted harshly
I can buy all things highly
People surround me will like me immediately
Mostly, no one would hate me intentionally

Summer air will be filled with closure
Living like god, no pressure
Bartering bliss and francs with all kinds of pleasure
This might be the best life ever, and that’s for sure

I’m pretty much certain, this is true
It is, no more sky of blue
I caught, all of a sudden, by a sunlight beam
And I’ve been awakened, it was all just a dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 22 April 2010

interesting title that's awakening...good read.

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this poem is nice., i am happy it was just a dream

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 May 2010

Interesting presentation. Nice one.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 April 2010

every verse... every line..... nice one!

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Auty Paul Jason 24 April 2010

I also wish i could live like that. Pretty nice poem Mr S.

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Whispering Rose 23 April 2010

a nice dream...nicely expressed

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Woo Who 23 April 2010

wow! the poem is nice I mean really! I am adding it to my favouriates! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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