Farewell! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by lalitha iyer

Farewell! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


At the moment
thousands waved
cheered of his departure
he beamed at the crowd
happily aiding
his speedy exit
with a heavy heart
carrying a burden
of isolation
lonely future
in his tour package
he walked his tears
frozen to solid fears.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 02 June 2009

a wonderful poem and intense

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

An excellent farewell, last few lines are amazing. I love this poem with full 10 marks.

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Catrina Heart 29 May 2009

he walked his tears frozen to solid fears....... ------- wonderful end rhymes.........nice shorty master piece.10+++

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