Fear Poem by YURI DURAAN

Fear

Rating: 4.5


My feet are buried
in sand...
the tide is coming in
and I cannot save
myself...
fear overcomes me,
it being the
sacrifice
I give to the waves that
threaten to conquer me.
My hair is blowing
wildly
in the wind
and my eyes are white-hot
coals looking into the storm
but burning within,
speaking
to me...
screaming down into me..
only,
there is no-one to hear…
no witness
to tell those who will come
to silently collect me,
there will be
no soul catcher for me,
no-one to close my eyes...
only the salt of the sea
and your name
on my lips

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vijay Gupta 19 April 2008

poem is good i like it............

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Usman Hanif 11 April 2008

entrapped there on the beach... like the fly in the web! awesome! the idea that appeals is that it is unique! ! ! i opened the random poem and it came out to be a fabulously awesome! ! ! good work marm...

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Nomi Mas 29 January 2008

intense. the poem flows beautifully with the crashing waves.

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Wow, this beach scene is a great way of putting out this message. I see it so vividly.

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YURI DURAAN

YURI DURAAN

South Africa
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